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A Fighting Thought

September 15, 2009 Su Leave a comment Go to comments

Pre Script : The poem is written by personifying a “Thought” (Just in case I make you lose your way in b/w :) )

Few thoughts remain unlucky in my mind
Among the millions fighting to own ‘her’ essence.
The ones who win are so happy that,
They are ready to defy my presence!

What is it that drives them so far,
I sometimes wonder…
They’re running through my mind day and night,
Subjecting my mind to plunder.

When I saw the essence that prevails in them
Through my mind’s eye
Silently, I backed off from the fanfare
With a contented sigh.

One thought-fellow comes to me and says
“I’m your’s to own, brother!
But what actually drives me
Is none, but your lover!”

That sums up the agony of the unlucky thought
To remain without ‘her’ in him, in spite of the battles he fought!

Post Script : Ultimately, I’m happy. A few among millions matter little, if not nothing at all! ;)

  1. September 15, 2009 at 9:39 am | #1

    O bete!!! 8O yeah kya?? I hope its just the though ;) :D

  2. September 15, 2009 at 9:42 pm | #2

    nice!

  3. September 18, 2009 at 10:53 am | #3

    Personifying Thoughts..>!! Good Thought..!!

  4. October 1, 2009 at 5:23 am | #4

    fascinating :)
    btw long time i came to your space…how you doin??

  5. October 5, 2009 at 11:43 pm | #5

    Very interesting.

  6. October 14, 2009 at 10:00 am | #6

    coooliioooo….! :D

    and why have you stopped visiting my blog… argghhh!!!

  7. December 1, 2009 at 4:46 pm | #7

    Interesting… :)

  8. Prashanth Rajan
    December 7, 2009 at 9:03 pm | #8

    simple but yet profound

  1. October 30, 2009 at 12:23 am | #1