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Slicing My Heart

Like a knife dipped in honey and sugar, in its pristine glory,
And waiting to cut through an unsuspecting heart,
As stealthy, yet gracious, as the rain slicing the air,
Love came in an instant, as a strike of lightening.

Wounded i was by the coldness spewed by the hot strike,
As pain was all that i knew till unseen joy was waiting.
It carried the essence of my lover to my blood, and through me,
Announcing to every last part of my being that my heart was kissed.

The vigor in the cut would not let it heal for a century
And after that, does it matter!
But in the time between, would the sweet painĀ  let me survive
through a myriad emotions of a heart make…
Or worse, a heartbreak…?

Love is probably, the trading of hearts,
With life as its investment, and ethereal happiness, my profit.
But the fear of loss matters to a sliced heart like no other
‘Coz, when she says “Yes!” now, and “Bye…”(for good) later,
It feels like falling into a void or an abyss
And being born just to die like this!

Slicing My Heart

Slicing My Heart

  1. June 30, 2009 at 11:10 pm | #1

    heart touching..!!!

  2. July 1, 2009 at 9:46 am | #3

    Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh!!!! Love shove and all, hun??? ;) Sahi ja rahe ho… :)

    • Su
      July 2, 2009 at 10:16 pm | #4

      Thnx a lot. :) I’l let the whole blogosphere know when “love shove and all” is happening. :)

  3. July 1, 2009 at 10:35 pm | #5

    always loved your poetry though u dont post many.

    • Su
      July 2, 2009 at 10:17 pm | #6

      thank you very much. :) I wont disappoint you in future too. :)

  4. July 2, 2009 at 9:25 pm | #7

    Nice one!

  5. aisha khan
    July 2, 2009 at 10:25 pm | #9

    hi,it,s so nice to read your poem you are good poetry thankyou.

  6. July 3, 2009 at 1:35 pm | #10

    Wooow…..VERY EMOTIONAL ONE…..
    “….rain slicing the air,” – What a Metaphor!!!!
    Good one…. :)

  7. July 3, 2009 at 4:53 pm | #11

    Really good one!!! :)

    With life as its investment, and ethereal happiness, my profit. Pyaar me profit??? Wah!!! :D

    Have a great weekend :)

    Cheers!!!

  8. July 4, 2009 at 9:02 pm | #12

    Very nicely done!

  9. July 5, 2009 at 10:19 pm | #13

    oooh so touchy!!

  10. July 6, 2009 at 11:57 am | #14

    Broken Heart !!! :shock:

  11. July 7, 2009 at 11:16 pm | #15

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  12. July 9, 2009 at 3:15 pm | #16

    Ouch! You got dumped?? :D
    Dude, contact me for free love gyaan! :D

  13. July 16, 2009 at 8:24 pm | #17

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    Cheers,
    Anwin

  14. July 19, 2009 at 4:40 am | #18

    a big hug Su, sigh! thats what love is all about…beautiful poetry! :)

    • Su
      July 20, 2009 at 3:51 pm | #19

      Thnx a lot for the gesture. :)

  15. August 5, 2009 at 12:23 pm | #20

    Is this related to the “slim, cute girl with the sexy hair”??? :D
    Good one, though! :)

    • Su
      August 5, 2009 at 3:25 pm | #21

      Thnx a lot! :) No, it is not related to the “slim, cute girl with sexy hair.” :P

  16. August 8, 2009 at 4:59 pm | #22

    nice very nice … tnx su ;)

  17. August 9, 2009 at 9:55 am | #23

    omg! u are in love… whoaaa….!!!

    man where have u been these days????!!?!

    the poem is a beauty… and an absolute art in itself…

    good show dude…!

    :)

  18. August 28, 2009 at 10:39 pm | #24

    hello dear!!!!

    how are you?

    I hope fine…
    hugz and kissez

    :)

  19. September 5, 2009 at 12:52 am | #25

    where are you?

    I miss you…

    :(

    *leaving hugs and kisses for you, honey*

    • Su
      September 5, 2009 at 8:50 pm | #26

      Hi Roberta! :) glad to see you again. as u can see from my blog, i’m hardly posting anything. forget that! I’m not attending to it also :( being busy and lost the touch of blogging too. :( however, glad to see you back. Have you re-started blogging?

  20. September 5, 2009 at 10:29 pm | #27

    hi!!!!
    you couldn’t imagine how much I am happy to have re-started blogging…
    but let me employ…
    I just have ’stolen’ my father’s computer!!!!
    I was missing ya all very much and…
    yeah…
    you don’t know one thing…
    some days ago I was reading the comments of ‘goodbyes’ that you and all my other web-friends have left me on the last post I have written before being off blogging…
    well…
    YOUR ONE MADE ME CRY…
    REALLY!!!!!!
    :(

    I am back…
    to make every my fiend in the blogsphere SMILE!!!

    :)

    *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs*

    • Su
      September 7, 2009 at 3:26 pm | #28

      wow! I’m humbled to hav a frnd like you. :) its good that u’re back to blogging. its still good to know that u’re blogging by ’stealing’ ur dad’s comp. ;) hav a nice time. :)

  21. September 7, 2009 at 6:59 pm | #29

    @Su:
    ahahah thanks!!!!

    I’m proud to have friends like you, too…!!!!

    yeah it’s so good to be back…
    it’s practically the only good thing for me right now…
    :(

    however, I am very happy for this..
    I missed ya all so much!!!

    have a great day, honey…
    *hugs*

  22. September 13, 2009 at 8:20 am | #30

    It’s a very beautiful, touching poem.

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