U, Me, and a Mystery

Who, Where and How are you
Is a sweet mystery I’ve to crack
Waiting to happen, it is, to start off
An eternal journey where there is no turning back

Obsessions may be many
But heart desired, is one
Imperfections, if any
I’l see them as gifts from heaven

Tests of time will be out-classed
By the sheer truth of our togetherness
When we two, are not two, but one,
There is no question of seperation.

Waiting for me, you might be
Like I am, for you, in here
Let whatever come as a storm
We’ll die only after being one, my dear

  1. September 22, 2008 at 9:56 pm | #1

    Very nice. Who is it for? :D

  2. Su
    September 22, 2008 at 9:58 pm | #2

    @Anniyan : no reservations yet! :P

  3. apoorva
    September 22, 2008 at 10:24 pm | #3

    wow…..too good….
    wish u could dedicate it for someone ri8???!!!!!

  4. September 22, 2008 at 11:42 pm | #4

    oooohhhhhhh! very very romantic indeed! :)

  5. September 23, 2008 at 7:38 am | #5

    Lovely poem. But the rhyming scheme is different in different stanzas. Thats little distracting.

  6. September 30, 2008 at 3:45 am | #6

    Wow!! Very creative..I love the independence you’ve taken as a poet…the liberty with the whole poem rhyme scheme!! nice….

    My fav lines –
    Imperfections, if any
    I’l see them as gifts from heaven

    Loved these!

  7. December 6, 2008 at 12:29 pm | #7

    “Tests of time will be out-classed
    By the sheer truth of our togetherness
    When we two, are not two, but one,
    There is no question of seperation.”

    My idea of a perfect love story… its too too good… keep up the show dude…!

    :lol: :mrgreen: :idea: :roll:

  8. manushi
    December 13, 2008 at 11:57 pm | #8

    soulmates :) …beautiful

  9. January 14, 2009 at 7:54 pm | #9

    whoa.. Fantabulous…

    but world is not ideal so if u mean it really.. be careful :P

  10. radha
    February 24, 2009 at 8:18 am | #10

    i like this

  1. February 19, 2009 at 3:11 pm | #1